Score: 7

"funny but..."

submission: Left 4 Speed

date: February 2, 2009

Did we REALLY need the racist cariciture of Louis and the KFC joke? It was damn funny but come on dude, I think newgrounds has enough racist stuff mixed in the usual submissions to put the KKK and neo-nazi's to shame.

Score: 3

"I really didnt like it."

submission: Bowja From His Cashle

date: January 7, 2009

I saw what you were going for and almost turned it off halfway through the toon, but opted to continue watching. Maybe its not my type of humor, maybe it was the fact that there was nothing going on and the narration was just stupid for the most part, but I think you could have made something actually funny.

This really felt like half assed one joke ADD type humor, really not my thing. Next time maybe have an actual story with more than one type of repetitive joke?

Score: 5

"Needs work..."

submission: Higurashi Flashy Thingy

date: July 11, 2008

But you're on the right path. Maybe have less of a chaotic drawing style next time and a faster framerate?

Score: 0

"wasnt really much of anything..."

submission: Gaybar : Guest

date: June 15, 2008

you might try to write out a story before animating.

Score: 10

"It'd be great if you finished this series..."

submission: Silent Hill 2: CE

date: June 10, 2008

as everyone else says, fantastic job, cute art style, great use of traditional animation as well as flash tweens. Hope you come back to this project and create a second episode.

Score: 10

"a perfect flash movie..."

submission: Final Fantasy A+

date: June 6, 2008

has a wonderful 3 act structure, some character development, lots of humor, and a great climax and resolution.

this is an inspiration for aspiring flash artists everywhere, as well as intermediate flash artists like myself.

thanks for yoru hard work its a joy to watch.

Score: 6

"well..."

submission: How 2 Play Counterstrike

date: June 3, 2008

you have a good idea here man, but you need a preloader, you should consider using buttons with your flash, and also work on the pacing of your movie. it was slow and kind of klunky.

Keep at it, you'll get better.

Score: 4

"...Yeah"

submission: theBEAST

date: January 4, 2007

...this was pointless. You might consider posting christian propeganda elsewhere. There are many different themes here on NG and all have plenty of enjoyable submissions, this however is preachy, boring, loud and above all it really is pointless.

If you want to make a point you might consider putting more effort into being suttle with your message as well as having a story instead of random scenes and pentagrams.