While I kind of enjoy these, they're way too short. I feel you should be pushing for at least 90 seconds each toon and there are literally dozens of facts small, and large to share. I think you're limiting yourself here by just keeping it at like 3 or so facts per toon.
Especially a film like Alien which there are so many amazing bits of trivia that you can share with people. Push a little harder dude.
Well I'm pushing these out every tuesday, so it can either be longer and not come out every week, or shorter and have regular programming. It's a deliberate choice, not a lazy one.
Loved it, only thing I think it needed was a slightly longer climax and some more resolution, but it was a lot of fun!
Your work continues to amaze and entertain dude, great motion and fluid ation scenes are always a pleasure to watch. I look forward to your next entry.
Cant say I thought this was really that funny, but I'm more confused to see that its back on the front page despite almost 2 weeks having passed since it was replaced by another Daily 1st.
Loved it. Its short,sweet, and twisted. Thanks for sharing it sir.
Did we REALLY need the racist cariciture of Louis and the KFC joke? It was damn funny but come on dude, I think newgrounds has enough racist stuff mixed in the usual submissions to put the KKK and neo-nazi's to shame.
its making fun of the racists themselves, if you play online its impossible to avoid some shouting CHIKKITEE WATA MELONS MUFUCKA
I really didnt like it.
I saw what you were going for and almost turned it off halfway through the toon, but opted to continue watching. Maybe its not my type of humor, maybe it was the fact that there was nothing going on and the narration was just stupid for the most part, but I think you could have made something actually funny.
This really felt like half assed one joke ADD type humor, really not my thing. Next time maybe have an actual story with more than one type of repetitive joke?
But you're on the right path. Maybe have less of a chaotic drawing style next time and a faster framerate?
wasnt really much of anything...
you might try to write out a story before animating.
It'd be great if you finished this series...
as everyone else says, fantastic job, cute art style, great use of traditional animation as well as flash tweens. Hope you come back to this project and create a second episode.
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